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Cassidy LaVelle G.'s avatar

OH YEAHHH THIS IS GOOD!!! Who's this long black haired mystery lady- I'm so intrigued :D You've got such rich and vivid description, well done well done!!!!

Dylan's avatar

shes both a figment of imagination and a memory forgotten. shes as real as he. part of a self he no longer knows.

inspired by my many encounters with black haired women… they always seem like a figment… always a past.

Coral Evermore's avatar

Oooo I enjoyed the description of that "black mess", it was very gross in the best way possible!! Also the haunted house vibes are strong in this one. Thank you so much for joining in on the monthly theme!! :)

Dylan's avatar

I'm so glad you liked it! but the first book has the weakest descriptions out of everything. The action picks up in book 2 in 3, linked at the bottom of the story :)